Bobbin Premise Assessment
Got a great idea for a book? This is your chance to have it assessed by a New York Times bestselling editor.
The Bobbin Premise Assessment is the optimum editorial assessment to get professional feedback on your idea for a fraction of the cost of a major edit. It is designed to give you the best editorial assessment available and ensure your book has the reach and impact it deserves.
This program is tailored for fiction and nonfiction authors who want to publish a high-level professional book, but need to make sure it is absolutely the best possible book.
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Outline vs. Synopsis
What’s the difference between and plot outline and a synopsis?
You may find some people use these terms interchangeably, but they are not the same thing.
What is an Outline?
A fiction outline generally is…
- Used as a guide during the writing process to help you remember how you want the story to unfold.
- Helps to cut down on the amount of rewriting that must be done to create a good second draft
- Follows no particular format but usually include central themes, character arcs, major plot-points and overall character conflicts.
- When we evaluate fiction outlines, we’re checking whether the character arcs are well-formed, if the structure is commercially viable and if the story is interesting enough to fill enough chapters for a whole book.
Writers who rely on plot outlines are sometimes called “plotters,” because they plan their novels in advance.
A Nonfiction outline generally is…
- A chapter-by-chapter capsule summary of a nonfiction book.
- Think of it like an enhanced table of contents.
- The purpose of an outline is to summarize the information which will appear in the finished book.
- Its format will include chapter numbers, chapter titles and/or headings, and a point-by-point breakdown of topics covered in each chapter.
- When we evaluate outlines, we’re checking whether the topic is meaty enough to fill enough chapters for a whole book.
- We’re also checking whether the core thesis is thoroughly developed.
- We’re also looking at things like organization of ideas, the way the chapters build upon each other, and so on.
Many nonfiction books are sold on an outline plus some configuration of sample pages, such as an introduction and sample chapter. We evaluate the sample pages for writing quality. We evaluate the outline for content. There will be other relevant questions, too, such as whether the author has a platform and how broad that platform might be, which might be addressed in the outline, cover letter, sample chapters, or pitch, but ought to be addressed somewhere.
What is a Synopsis?
Synopses are written after you have finished writing your manuscript.
That’s partially to reflect any changes you made to the story during the writing process, and because some people (pantsers) don’t make plot outlines, preferring to make up the story as they go along.
(Of course, the downside to pantsing is that you risk getting stuck partway through your story, with no idea where to go next. Also, your first draft may need a lot more rewriting.)
Both Fiction & Nonfiction synopses generally are…
- A narrative summary of a work of fiction or narrative nonfiction.
- Think of it like enhanced jacket copy which relates the beginning, middle, and end of the story.
- You will use your synopsis to introduce your main characters, establish the themes, and describe the events in the plot.
- The synopsis might mirror the flow of events in the plot in a chapter-by-chapter manner, but it will still be presented in narrative format.
- A synopsis rarely uses headers and similar material, except that some formats have separate paragraphs to introduce characters. In that case, those paragraphs are sometimes headed “Characters,” and the plot summary is headed “Plot.” But these formats are less common than ordinary narrative formats.
- When we evaluate a synopsis, we’re checking that the plot is interesting and coherent.
- We’re also checking whether the characters are interesting, but that might be easier to determine from sample pages. The synopsis will at least give us a starting point, though.
- We might also be checking for other things like writing quality and tone, but the sample pages usually will be more useful for that purpose.
What's Included in Bobbin Premise Assessment?
Our Premise Assessment Package is everything you need to get from having a strong outline to writing a book that sells.
Bobbin's Guide to Premise PDF
An up-front primer that defines the terms used, explains and rationalizes the questions you’ll soon confront, and generally evolves and empowers your responses to the Questionnaire you’ll use to submit your premise for analysis. It’s a Cliff’s Notes tool for this program, defining terms and laying out the criteria used to vet your answers, a 101-level guide to everything you need to know about what makes a premise work, beginning with that it is, and isn’t.
A guided way to describe and submit your premise, broken down into elements.
Submit Your First 5 Manuscript Pages
Submit the first 5 pages from your book to get one round of feedback. This checks off the “narrative voice” box among the several other criteria for effectiveness that are required of a story that works.
If you need it, we’ll provide you with our Bobbin Story Structure Template for fiction authors. Or our Bobbin Nonfiction Book Template for nonfiction authors.
In-line comments inserted throughout your outline/synopsis.
A 15 – 45 minute voice recording of summary insights.
Respond, Clarify and Revise
You’re invited to respond, clarify and revise, based on the feedback you’ll receive, or ask questions from that context. (Further iterations, if requested, can be negotiated from there.)
Your editor will provide you with ideas and recommendations, relative to revision, further resources and even marketing (queries, submissions, strategies, etc.).
Additional Pages $10/page
You have the opportunity (optional, with additional fee) to add as many manuscript pages as you’d like your editor to read (beyond the scene already covered within the scope of the base program).
For example, you may want a “first quartile” analysis, up through the First Plot Point – as many as 100 pages, give or take – which is a valuable window into how your story has been setup and thrust into motion.
Extra pages are read at a prorated rate of $10 per page, up to 25K words (in addition to the program fee).
Gabriella Lepore Author
Get your questions answered
Premise Assessment is not for writers seeking fluff reviews, but serious authors ready to take their work to a commercial level.
Who You Might Work With
Literary agent turned editor of fiction & memoir where narratives and protagonists have distinct, identifiable voices.
Seasoned book editor with 20 years of experience at Penguin Random House committed to helping writers make their stories sing.
Former HarperCollins editor with 15 years of experience developing and editing award-winning books and NYT bestsellers.
Experienced, passionate, and versatile non-fiction/fiction editor. Clients include Al Gore, Garth Brooks, Daniel Handler (Lemony Snicket).
Who should use Bobbin Premise Assessment?
- People who want to check that their book idea is commercially viable before investing in writing and editing
- People who want to fix big picture issues, reducing your edits down the line.
- People who are willing to invest the time and money necessary into quality
WHO SHOULD NOT
- People who aren’t open to criticism or being told that something is in need of further work
- People who want their book idea affirmed and seek blind praise
- People who don’t like writing or don’t have the time to sit down and write (see Bobbin Elite)
Frequently Asked Questions
The more detail, the better. This might include a synopsis of the plot from start to finish, character profiles (incl. goals, motivations, conflicts and backstories), scene breakdowns, and sample scenes. Bobbin can also provide an outline template if needed; please contact us for this prior to ordering.
It includes comments inserted throughout the text you submit, as well as an in-depth report summarizing key insights and recommendations.
Delivery turnaround is two weeks (unless your editor notifies you up front of a backlog that could delay beyond that period).
If you're serious about taking your work to a commercial level, let's talk.
We’ll discuss your book idea, see if it makes sense, and help you understand the best next steps.
What authors like you are saying
I liked the numerous changes, which felt more like choices and suggestions than a binary choice.
Bobbin’s insightful edits and suggestions were invaluable and allowed me to take my novel to the next level.
An absolutely amazing job! Couldn’t be happier with the end result. Every edit Bobbin made was made for a reason, rather than just for the sake of changing something.
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